Wednesday, 23 December 2009

Weightlessness

Weightless forms racing in the hallway;
In the eyes of children
Visions of Christmas
 
 23 Dec 09

6 comments:

  1. Weightless forms racing in the hallway;
    Approaching Christmas
    In the eyes of children

    [I'm moving the punchline to the end]

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  2. I would have also entitled this "Weightlessness."

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  3. Let's twist this even more :-)

    Weightless forms racing in the hallway;
    In the eyes of children
    Visions of Christmas

    (No need to put my name, really, as it's all your work; I'm just building things based on your original haiku!)

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  4. Deal. I like this one more. Thanks !!! :-)
    Twist more if needed.

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  5. It is beautiful . Like a Renoir painting.

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