Weightless forms racing in the hallway;Approaching ChristmasIn the eyes of children[I'm moving the punchline to the end]
I would have also entitled this "Weightlessness."
WOW ! Ok .
Let's twist this even more :-)Weightless forms racing in the hallway;In the eyes of childrenVisions of Christmas(No need to put my name, really, as it's all your work; I'm just building things based on your original haiku!)
Deal. I like this one more. Thanks !!! :-)Twist more if needed.
It is beautiful . Like a Renoir painting.