I'm not sure if it gives an image or a sort of happening rather; i'm not even sure if it's a haiku, so help!:)
Hi, It's carla. Good to hear from you random muse.I'm not sure if it's help I can give you, I'm still learning too. (The projector's name is Sky tracker or Space cannon; it's my husband's work :) ) Anyway, I liked it. It's like a graceful " Tap-Dance" ! Like Jene Kelly's "Dancing in the rain" :-)
Jene kelly's movie is " Singing in the rain" :-)Anyway , I hope you keep posting R.M.A. It's so much fun !
Najla ?!!!! It's me, Carla (Nicole). I checked your profile,But I wasn't sure of the picture so I called Nicole to ask about your family name. Small world ! Kisses and See you as usual .
no way that's you??? hahaha i was so surprised! i love your haikus girl. yes it does help, but i'm just not sure if it's a restricted image or maybe something else, i just can't label it:)i'm glad you liked it, i will keep posting as long as i have my muse;) you do too. see you in uni.
Hi Najla,Yes, a nice haiku. An alternative version:Sky trackers on winter skies;Travelling at night,Music beats on my windshield[with the added ambiguity of whether "beats" is a noun or a verb]
I'm sorry about the previous information. I asked again about the projector. Its technical name is SEARCH LIGHT (it has one spot) but the brand differs : sky tracker or space cannon. The new version of the haiku is very beautiful and it can be both ways Sky tracker on winter skies....OrSearch light on winter skies;Traveling at night,Music beats on my windshield Thank you Paul and Najla.
yes thanks sir, i like the alternative, still trying to figure out the names though with carla's help. I like the "beats" ambiguity, i'll see if i come up with something, maybe keep the lights as searching (verb) and add that ambiguity for "beats"....we'll see.thank you both of you, you're welcome carla:)