Thursday, 1 April 2010

Tree Leaves

Fresh afternoon;
Sharp and wet tree leaves
Stick out like insolent tongues !

1 April 2010


  1. Interesting image!

    My version:

    "Sharp and wet green tree leaves
    Stick out like insolent tongues"

  2. Ah! That was the word I was looking for !!! "Stick out" !! I tried to remember what a doctor would tell his patient ! Thanks :-)
    The tongue image was seen by my daughter AYA at NDU. I was amazed how she saw it. She's happy she shares this haiku.