Wednesday, 5 May 2010

Wild Berries

The fallen berries;
Under my shoes
Squashing sounds!

16 April 2010

4 comments:

  1. i can picture it and I can hear the sound of squeezing. nicely written

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  2. I would also have said:

    The fallen berries;
    Under my shoes
    Squashing sounds

    "unpleasant" involves judgment, not a bad thing, of course, but it limits perception or, at least, imposes itself and puts reality in a box. But that's just my opinion :-)

    And "squeezing" is not really a sound, rather an action.

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  3. Thanks ! and welcome Pakos !
    This computer Dictionary is not providing me with enough synonyms! 'Squashing' is the word I needed! :-)
    Thanks again.

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