Keep the surprise for the last line (after all, you were surprised yourself!):Tap dance in the kitchen?The boiling waterIs shaking the pan's lid!
I love it ! The strange thing is that it happened so many times but I never saw it in this way; the lid starts moving up and down while whistled music like a flute playing comes out through the opening.. and a tap dance..Thanks.
Sometimes I get confused when I write a haiku, which sentence to put first or last. Here I thought the surprise is in the tap dance idea. But I like how you did it. We should play more with the style. It's not very easy though. It needs a lot of practice and haiku reading.
Yes, it was a great haiku to begin with. As Pascal did, though, could you put the original version in the comments so there's a way to see how changing the order of images can make a difference.
Sure :-)The boiling waterShakes the pan's lidSounding like tap dancingThanks :-)