Saturday, 31 July 2010

Distance

Away from home;
The moon, here and there,
Is the same

23/07/2010

9 comments:

  1. i felt sad after reading this haiku
    i felt the moon suddenly so normal

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  2. What's wrong with normal? :-)
    I was in Lebanon a week ago, it was full moon, then after 25 minutes I arrived to Cyprus; it was also full moon ...

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  3. The moon, here and there,
    Waving farewell or welcome,
    is always the same

    :$

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  4. Nice try Pascal :-) But you see, the moon was standing still (in my perception of course on that moment) while I was moving in space and time ... it wasn't "doing" anything; just being.

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  5. I added "Away from home" as a first line.

    The original one was : The moon/ Here and there/ Is the same

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