Saturday, 10 July 2010

A Dream

the road is a snake;
one corner suddenly bends
with closed eyes comes death


I already know that it has"too much "visible" philosophy in it, as opposed to the very suggestive view of life in Japanese culture and in Zen Buddhism which influenced haiku so much." 
but i posted it, and will be expecting some tough lessons :)


  1. You don't need "tough lessons" anymore :-)
    And for that, we'd have to wait for Paul.
    I'm very happy to see you do Haiku and post.
    This haiku is "tough" for me to comment about,
    but I see the idea of a "dream" very interesting!

  2. the sentence in italic is Paul's opinion :)