Friday, 3 December 2010

Poplar Tree

Going out for a walk,
A crowd of green hands
Start waving 'goodbye'

02/12/2010

4 comments:

  1. I wonder here if the verb 'start' takes s or not. The green hands are the ones waving. ...

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  2. I think you have it right the way it is and it sounds better.
    Belinda

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  3. Thanks Belinda! I'm very happy to have found your blog! I loooooove the way you write :-)

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  4. ....And welcome to our blog !!!!! :-)

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