Thursday, 9 December 2010

Smile

Walking back home;
Near the entrance 
The moon smiles back at me

09/12/2010

3 comments:

  1. Yes, nice.

    If I may, my version would be to give more life to the moon, so I would reverse it like that:

    Walking back home;
    Near the entrance
    The moon smiles back at me

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  2. Yes!!! much softer and less personal!!!
    Thanks! :-)
    The original:

    Walking back home;
    At the entrance
    I smile back at the moon

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  3. You are right. It was the moon's action first, looking like a smiley face, shining crescent at the base of a faded grey circle...full of life!
    Thanks again! :-)

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