Friday, 4 February 2011

Thirst

After the heavy rains,
The tree leaves
Are thirsting for more 

04/02/2011

2 comments:

  1. Excellent, Carla.

    You start with a mundane fact (the rains), then zoom in to the leaves, then bring the punch line where the leaves are "almost" personified, but not entirely.

    Your hint/suggestion is well balanced: neither too philosophical nor too indifferent, neither too personal nor too open.

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  2. Thanks Paul for your constant teaching and comment!
    No words could describe my joy of learning haiku with you!

    Nice new design! :-)

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