Very nice, Carla;Was it a mountain scene, near or in a village; were the lemons just below a tree or near a merchant's stall?
Thanks Paul!Well, it's in Sahel Alma Jounieh, along the road where I walk, a long rainwater drain on the side of that road, where lemon trees are planted above which drop their fruits sometimes inside that drain ... it looks like an old village, a rooster and few chicken live under these trees, old houses and a valley of virgin bushes (where the "White collared cat" haiku also was made ... :-)
Great;Is there a way to add any of your description above to the haiku, just to put in more of the feeling of the place?
Thanks!!! :-) OK; to start with this one:Lemon TreesShivering trees in the village pathway;Splashed lemons Turn the draining waters into lemonade
LemonadeA cool breeze along the village's alley;Splashing lemons Are dissolving in the rainwater drain
My last modification:The long row of trees;Splashing lemonsAre dissolving on the groundThe original was:The fallen lemons;Running waters on the roadAre turning into lemonade