Sunday, 15 May 2011

The Wave

A gentle wave
Is moving like wind
Across shades of blue sea

12/05/2011

6 comments:

  1. Yes, nice, Carla.

    Just for fun, I tried the following variant based on your haiku:

    A gentle wave
    Is moving like wind
    Across shades of blue sea

    Do you think it works?
    (Probably not...)

    ReplyDelete
  2. The picture was of a green field of grass, 15 cm high and 10 meters long, when a sudden breeze hovers across it, brushing it like hair in a wavy movement. 2 colors appeared: light and dark green. It was like a green sea with green waves.
    What do you think Paul? There was no blue anywhere, maybe you should use green... please feel free to have fun :-)

    ReplyDelete
  3. How about:

    A wave of wind
    Caressing a sea
    Of multi-green grass

    ReplyDelete
  4. Yes, I know there's no blue, but the fun variant was about turning it into an equivalent haiku, but this time with the sea (no field, no green grass, etc.).

    ReplyDelete
  5. Wow! That is new; my brain did not get it at first. Variant?! I see.
    So,
    A gentle wave
    Is moving like wind
    Across shades of blue sea

    Yes.

    ReplyDelete
  6. Before being modified, the haiku was:

    A gentle wind
    Is moving like a wave
    Across shades of green grass

    ReplyDelete