Nice.What I like is the fact that both eyes and screen produce images, reflect them like a mirror, and "see" things (maybe not yet for the screen, but coming near with webcams).Are both eyes and screen tired as well?
Hi Paul :)Right! both have eyes that interact ... They both could also run out of energy ;)
Ok, an idea: why don't you write another haiku which shows that both you and the laptop are, in a way, "alive"?
Ok :-)On the heavy couch,The laptop and IAre having a secret conversation!
OrThe warm couch;Images on the laptopAre becoming memories
I thought of adding the word "screen" on the last one:The warm couch;Images on the laptop' screenAre becoming memories