Thursday, 2 June 2011

Shutters

The heavy day;
Eyelids are closing slowly
Along with the laptop 

01/06/2011

6 comments:

  1. Nice.

    What I like is the fact that both eyes and screen produce images, reflect them like a mirror, and "see" things (maybe not yet for the screen, but coming near with webcams).

    Are both eyes and screen tired as well?

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  2. Hi Paul :)
    Right! both have eyes that interact ...

    They both could also run out of energy ;)

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  3. Ok, an idea: why don't you write another haiku which shows that both you and the laptop are, in a way, "alive"?

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  4. Ok :-)

    On the heavy couch,
    The laptop and I
    Are having a secret conversation!

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  5. Or

    The warm couch;
    Images on the laptop
    Are becoming memories

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  6. I thought of adding the word "screen" on the last one:

    The warm couch;
    Images on the laptop' screen
    Are becoming memories

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